First Lines Fridays (92) – May 31, 2024

First Lines Fridays is a weekly feature for book lovers hosted by Wandering Words. What if instead of judging a book by its cover, its author or its prestige, we judged it by its opening lines?

  • Pick a book off your shelf (it could be your current read or on your TBR) and open to the first page
  • Copy the first few lines, but don’t give anything else about the book away just yet – you need to hook the reader first
  • Finally… reveal the book!

Today’s First Lines:

Before the door opened, everything in Ambrose Beake’s life was perfect.
His potion shop stood empty and quiet, a reflection of the sleepy street outside. His footsteps echoed alone, delightfully alone, on the polished wood floor as he dusted the bottles.

Do you know which book this is from? Scroll down to find out!

Title: A Rival Most Vial

Author: R. K. Ashwick

Publication Date: January 25, 2023

Goodreads Synopsis

Two potion shops, one heated rivalry…until hate bubbles over into something else.

Any adventurer worth their sword knows about Ambrose Beake. The proud, quiet half-elf sells the best, and only, potions in the city—until a handsome new shopkeeper named Eli opens another potion shop across the street, throwing Ambrose’s peace and ledgers far off balance.

Within weeks, they’re locked in a war of price tags and products—Ambrose’s expertise against Eli’s effortless charm. Toil leads to trouble, the safety gloves come off, and right as their rivalry reaches a boiling point…

The mayor commissions them to brew a potion together.

The task is as complex as it is lucrative, pushing both men to the limits of their abilities and patience. Yet as the fires burn and cauldrons bubble…they find a different sort of chemistry brewing.

Have you read A Rival Most Vial? What did you think? I’d love to see your spoiler-free opinions in the comments!

5 thoughts on “First Lines Fridays (92) – May 31, 2024

  1. “delightfully alone”, I love that! A wonderful first line and really makes me want to pick this up!

      • hahah as it often is 😂 Anyways I hope you enjoy the story!

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